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Sick

The main melody is simple but comes correct and I really like the beat you have. I made a mashup of this song with two other songs from Newgrounds (http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/list en/267165). If you don't like it tell me and I'll take it down. Thanks for inspiring me though man.
Peace
-Dejinelli-

I love this song man

So much I made a mashup of it with 2 other songs from NG. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/267165
If you don't like it tell me and I'll take it down, but this song is awesome. Smooth beat that really meshes with the chill guitar.
Peace
-Dejinelli-

vanguard182 responds:

i'm flattered you thought it was good enough to make a remix of it, keep up the good work i like it

Decent

I think Adamtechno is right, you could use a few more instruments to add to the melody underneath the main melody, but at the same time I think there is a lot of unnecessary background noise that just sounds screechy and takes away from the underlying melodies (like the arpeggio you have going at around 0:36). The drums could also be improved and added to, but overall it's a pretty decent, cool remix.

gOdiZ responds:

Thanks but this is sooo old now haha.

Epic

This is amazing. I'm not sure how it sounds so epic but it does.
Did you use FL Studio or something else?
Damn this track is hot.
Peace
-Dejinelli-

TenchuX responds:

It is indeed made in FL Studio. Glad you enjoyed it.

Wow

This is a really awesome song. You are clearly a very talented musician and a good singer, and I don't really think the pronunciation/accent takes away from the song at all. The quality and clarity of the sound is a lot higher than most other songs on this website and it sounds very professional. I'm anxiously anticipating the next song from you. Thanks for making this and releasing it for free, it's going right on my iPod.
Peace
-Dejinelli-

cool yo

I like it. Out of curiosity what was that bass you used? It's pretty cool, kinda reminds me of that Animusic thing a little.
Peace

Pretty cool

Your guitar skills are intense but the drums lost you a point. If you need a live drummer contact me, I have decent recording quality (Snowball usb mic) and can probably help you out. But this song on the whole has a cool sound to it. Definitely you're a shredder.
-Dejinelli-

Blimey

She's got a lovely voice. The guitar is smooth and compliments the vocals well, and the drums fall right in the pocket. This song is fantastic.

sorohanro responds:

Thanx, I'm glad you like it.

Dude this is cool.

I like your music. It's really chill and stuff. Unlike the other reviewers I think the orchestra is pretty cool in the beginning. I like the way it builds up. Good work, make more like this.
-Dejinelli-

jUMPYm4X responds:

thanks dude.

Hey man, this is cool.

The intro was really cool, and the tune yeah.
As for flow, it seemed smooth although at times the guitar seemed a bit loud and overpowering, but it was pretty good.
The piece as a whole was short and you could have incorporated more parts and instruments into it, but then it is a demo ;) Though it gets a bit repetetive at times.
Other than that the melody seemed pretty decent and the beat was slick (though at times covered up by the guitar). Altogether well done, I definitely liked the wind instrument. I'll check back in when the full version is out.
-Dejinelli-

HMS-Productions responds:

hey thanks, yup, so far I've taken out the guitar, changed the main instrument written a few parts and kinda added a techno twist to it (couldnt resist XD)

-M

How's it going! I assume if you got here, you probably checked out some of my tunes. Thanks for that! And if not then do ;)

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